something short i wrote

[rileyedens]

when I was with her, it was one of the few times I let myself feel. I wanted to feel her love, her sorrow, and everything in between. For even in her saddest moments, her galaxies brought me to a tranquil place, where the waves met the sun and believe me, I could stair at the color purple, forever.

this is really short but tell me what you think! :)

[JamesSuperBoy]

A good short piece I imagine the horizon a sunset.

[Vermilion]

That's great peace it's so easy to imagine and you can feel the emotions

[Abhorrence]

Sounds cool, I like your use of words. That sounds so vague but oh well. :P

[amgb]

Very nice~ You can feel the connection between these two lovers. Good job~