Hip-hop/Freestyle dancing

[Jem310]

I do hip-hop/freestlye dancing. I have a small issue with my dancing that is bugging me. The sharpness of my dancing is not great. That's the only issue I am having. I'm going to try dancing in a mirror or taking a video of myself dancing for that I know where I lose the sharpness. Can anyone with dance experience (especially in freestyle and hip hop) give me some advice on how to make my moves much more sharp?

[SethfromMI]

for something like that it is much better to have a coach or someone who can see what you're doing in person. it is hard to give advice based on just what you write, even though I am n dancing expert to begin with