..:: untitled from memory ::..

[bbychop]

Every night I lied awake
Wishing you were here for me to love
You and her were together
And every little "I love you" was a lie
I feel like a fool.
Why did I love you when all you did was bring me down?
You tore me in two.
Now I lie here with a broken heart and a bloody wrist.
This si nothing you can fix.
All you are doing is breaking me and I still believe every word you said to me.
What am I going to do?!
End it.
End everything.
Consider this forever ending now.

[teencrazykid]

This is so expressive. I have tried to write things like that, but most of the time, I dont have the "soul" When I do, I'm not anywhere where I can right it down, like I'll be walkin down the street or somethin. Youve got talent, keep at it!