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Skittlez1313
March 30th, 2008, 01:06 AM
*its kinda...a book, its an intro, the rest I'll write on quizilla :3*
*note : It takes place in a futuristic time*


I kicked up the leaves and walked on by, seeing all the things that had destroyed my lovely home. I wanted to cry, I wanted to give earth back what it gave to me. A tear fell down my cheek, I felt stupid, loving something that had no feelings, no mind, but I truly loved earth, I loved the trees, the rivers, the animals, all the things that might have been there if not for humanity. Now the only thing left of all that, was a tree, a tree that kept the world alive, and still yet, people were killing that tree little by little, I had to do something, I had to do it now. I had to save the last peice of my home before it was too late.


YEAH YEAH I KNOW ITS SHITTEH >> I need to work on it big time :3

Close102
March 30th, 2008, 06:43 AM
what the hell are you talking about that was awesome. if it gets published id definatly buy it

robbiehay1
March 30th, 2008, 07:15 AM
thats acctually really good and i soo wana read the rest

Bobby
March 30th, 2008, 10:13 AM
Your style is good. Good luck in your writing.

Zephyr
March 30th, 2008, 10:33 PM
Not bad at all = )
It kept me drawn in and interested.

superstar2067
April 1st, 2008, 07:26 AM
Bravo bravo really good i would love to see the rest

Areus
April 6th, 2008, 10:40 AM
That's really good! I'm not kidding, if I picked up this book in a bookstore and read that part, I'd definitely buy the book!

Skittlez1313
April 13th, 2009, 11:35 PM
*Cries*
I haven't been on in FOREVER, but thank you guys SO SO SO freaking much ; ; *Sniffle*.
As you can see, my grammar has improved... Woopee

STAYING_STRONG4HIM
April 19th, 2009, 03:49 PM
I would totally buy that too if it were a book...Keep on writing...you can't just stop there...

chucknorrisrules
April 19th, 2009, 08:39 PM
Far too modest... It's fantabulous! ME WANT MOAR!

Sage
April 20th, 2009, 03:42 AM
Don't beat yourself up, chica. It's good so far. Keep goin'.

Stark
May 6th, 2009, 06:36 PM
Yeah, that's really good.

ErykaInspire.
May 9th, 2009, 06:06 PM
That's really good.
idk if you meant like, the entire world surviving off of one trees oxygen
and peoples pollution is killing it?
But that's just what I see(:
Very good writing style.