a cry

[Anonymous]

A look at my shaking palms.
Trying to find my way through these cold times.
Burdened by God.
Im not taking anything else for granted.
Hiking in 10 ft. of snow, trying not to be swallowed by its tremendous wrath.
A faint cry fro help is heard.
Help isnt on the way.
Im stuck in this 10 ft of snow.
I have nothing to contribute anyway.

[teencrazykid]

I like that....to the point. But hopefully u never get trapt in 10
ft of snow.

[kolte]

hes not talking about snow, its life......get it

[teencrazykid]

I know, but I'm using...whats the word....I dont know, that comment was supposed to reflect life, but it really doesn't make sense....does it? oh well....

[Cr0oked.Butterfli__x]

Lovely poem.

TeenCrazyKid - I understand you, you were keeping up with the metaphor - hoping that they never would end up in that situation.