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eugaurie
September 16th, 2014, 11:55 AM
I quickly wrote this thinking about someone who's last name is 'Treasure' and was just curious of whether it is awful or not)


A beauty so clear to ne'er be guised,
a beacon to aid my poor wandering
eyes. E'er to graze but so distant be,
thy truely is a treasure
So clear, yet unbenknownst be.
Thy beauty's burden to thyself; e'er to me.

Plane And Simple
September 19th, 2014, 12:07 PM
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