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Remora
September 14th, 2014, 01:20 PM
its a mystic entity composed of musical tones, what does it mean?
AKA please give me your opinion on this, this is my first work of music, ever
https://soundcloud.com/merlanyy/catnip
CosmicNoodle
September 14th, 2014, 02:58 PM
Work is needed, but in my opinion very good so far, even more so for a first attempt. Keep it up my kitten minion
CrazyPerson101
September 14th, 2014, 03:30 PM
Floof, you did nice job with that. I like it alot. Good Job
Remora
September 15th, 2014, 08:27 AM
Work is needed, but in my opinion very good so far, even more so for a first attempt. Keep it up my kitten minion

how can i improve it? :$
CosmicNoodle
September 15th, 2014, 01:05 PM
how can i improve it? :$

I sound like a dick for being the only one to avpctually critisize, but it seems a little generic, as if it where one of the preset ringtones on a cheap mobile phone. No jkdea how you could improve that, add some more backing perhaps,