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DouggyO.o
March 11th, 2008, 03:10 PM
This mask I wear,
he serves me well,
he hides my pain,
he they can't tell.

They see his smile,
never my tears,
he shows no sorrow,
he fights all my fears.

They believe he is me,
if only they knew,
that he is my mask,
my saviour too.

My scars he hides,
behind laughter and lies,
he say's he is fine,
but slowly he dies.

Atonement
March 11th, 2008, 03:34 PM
Great! Good good job.

But, I must point out that I made a poem called mask a few days ago... lol yeah, copier... lol jk

DouggyO.o
March 11th, 2008, 03:36 PM
really? haha woops.

i changed it to my mask haha

Patchy
March 11th, 2008, 04:04 PM
Thats great I love it, btw I just noticed your gamer tag, chocolate rain thats a great one :)

DouggyO.o
March 11th, 2008, 04:51 PM
thanks guys.

(and about my gamertag. Chocolate rain was a huge joke between me and my friends for a long time so i ended using that and im out of microsoft points to get a new one)

Patchy
March 11th, 2008, 04:52 PM
And its also a massive song on youtube :P

chocolate rain, some stay dry and otheres feel the pain, chocolate rain