Reaction.

[Atonement]

Reaction.

My leg wont stop,
It constantly shakes.
My mind wont stop,
It constanly aches.

School started my pain,
It triggered my attack.
I cannot control it,
It is a skill I yet lack.

My mind never relaxes,
It never is free.
I never can chill,
This is a huge problem, that I can see.

I had to see the doctors,
To stop all the pain.
They poked and proded me,
To see if I am sane.

All the questions they ask,
They just sit and wait.
Never looking away,
Deciding my fate.

It all starts again,
My shakes are going.
My brain is still racing,
My problem keeps growing!

All I can do is hope,
That it would be so grand,
But no,
You can't,
You can't understand!


Sorry everyone I know it is bad, I just hope to get my point across.

[tombstonequeen]

hmm as a fan of poetry and a decent reader
i'm gonna take a crack and say that it is about u wanting to be more about religion and ppl thinkin u weird for doin so?
am i right or way off?

[Atonement]

way, way off... I dont even know how you got that. lol. Sorry. No, it is about these damn anxiety attacks I have been getting lately.

[tombstonequeen]

oh it was all literal lol
i was thinkin it was a metaphor hahaha
man i suck

[japanman]

way, way off... I dont even know how you got that. lol. Sorry. No, it is about these damn anxiety attacks I have been getting lately. hmm anxiety attacksyour legs shaking i remmember those times they are confusing and terrorable but i recently finally stopped having them but if you wanna talk about anxiety just pm me if you want.

[theOperaGhost]

The poem doesn't suck, it's not my favorite of yours, but it still doesn't suck. You've said that all of your poems suck, but they don't. You need to give yourself some props man. Your poems don't suck because they are real, they are what you are really feeling. If you were just making them up they would be as good, but your not.

[Mzor203]

I think you show your feelings quite nicely with this poem. Keep up the good work.