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dopamine
June 15th, 2014, 12:57 AM
My mother always asks
"Why don't you make some plans with your friends"
if only she knew
how foreign that sounds
to me

How i have now clue
how conversations even
work

How my eyes sting
and a black hole
opens in my stomach
leaving me empty

How thought i have a loving family
but i feel so alone
how i actually like being alone

If only you knew mom.

Alexwellace
June 29th, 2014, 04:38 PM
This makes me want to walk up and hug you, oh so very much. This is a good thing, it means your portrayed emotion really well and made me 'feel'. Great Poem, but on the other hand, do you need a hug <3

Microcosm
June 30th, 2014, 10:02 PM
This is a really good poem :)