youraveragegirl
June 4th, 2014, 11:15 PM
Okay, so this is going to be rather vague but I need help with a book I am writing!
At the scene I am at in my dystopian book, a woman is looking for some way to trust my Male Main Character (MMC). She wants him to bring him back 'something', or do something to prove she can trust him. Well in the process of getting/searching for 'something' my MMC runs into my Female Main Character (FMC). So through several circumstances my MMC and FMC will have both returned to the woman with the something. May I also note my MMC and FMC have met earlier in the book, but my MMC did not like her and he moved on from her.
So my questions to you: What should that 'something' be? What can the woman ask my MMC to bring back that will make her trust him? How can I make my MMC end up with my FMC again?
Some additional notes:
-My FMC doesn't hate my MMC. She wants to end up with him because she needs him for her goal... (which would take forever to explain)
-The woman who wants 'something' knew my MMC years ago, but is unsure it is him years later and wants the 'something' not only as a sign of trust, but to confirm that it is him and that he will do whatever it takes to help her. So it has to be something somewhat difficult or hard to attain.
At the scene I am at in my dystopian book, a woman is looking for some way to trust my Male Main Character (MMC). She wants him to bring him back 'something', or do something to prove she can trust him. Well in the process of getting/searching for 'something' my MMC runs into my Female Main Character (FMC). So through several circumstances my MMC and FMC will have both returned to the woman with the something. May I also note my MMC and FMC have met earlier in the book, but my MMC did not like her and he moved on from her.
So my questions to you: What should that 'something' be? What can the woman ask my MMC to bring back that will make her trust him? How can I make my MMC end up with my FMC again?
Some additional notes:
-My FMC doesn't hate my MMC. She wants to end up with him because she needs him for her goal... (which would take forever to explain)
-The woman who wants 'something' knew my MMC years ago, but is unsure it is him years later and wants the 'something' not only as a sign of trust, but to confirm that it is him and that he will do whatever it takes to help her. So it has to be something somewhat difficult or hard to attain.