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Atonement
March 5th, 2008, 02:14 PM
I wrote a lot of these last night... well, here it goes again.

Hide

I hide in my room,
ten hours a day.
I do nothing,
I just sit here and lay.

Do you notice I am gone,
That I am always sad.
There isn't any shield,
Saying everything isn't bad.


It all began,
For I had no place to go.
You all have pushed me away,
You all keep saying no.

You want me to participate?,
In your pathetic shit?
Thats too bad,
I will not commit.

I stay far away,
From all my friends too.
But most of all,
I want to stay from you.

But once again you dont notice,
It is not that hard to see.
You fucked up already,
there is no more me.

I am a body,
I have no soul.
I pass each day by,
Digging deeper into my hole.

You only peek,
To see if I am still there.
Then you ignore me agian
If only this could be fair.

I give up as I write this,
My time is past down.
I dont want to see you,
If I do I shall frown.

Everyone caused all my pain,
And that is just it.
I regret to say I hate you,
I am done with your shit.

Sorry...

Hauptmann Kauffman
March 5th, 2008, 02:16 PM
Another great poem man, I really cant think of anything to say except that I will try my best to pull you out of that hole

Atonement
March 5th, 2008, 03:02 PM
Thanks... I wrote this in my head a couple days ago while my mom had a party downstairs. When I came downstairs after words her words were, "You you're home?"

I had been there for 7 hours

theOperaGhost
March 5th, 2008, 11:14 PM
Man that's gotta suck. Your a really talented guy. You deserve better recognition.