Gone.

[Atonement]

I know, its another post from tonight, but whatever. Leave a comment and try not to criticize the writing.

Gone

You have been gone for thirteen years,
And now you want to come back?
You have justified all my fears,
What is it that I lack?

You keep trying to communicate,
but I dont really care.
You want a relationship
But this isn't really fair.

You were there for all my brothers,
You were there when they were young
But where are you now?
I am your youngest son.

Why do you act like you want me?
Why do you seem like you do?
Do you think I can't see,
Right on through?

You only want to look good,
You only want some praise,
You seem like you are "caring"
But all you do is make me craze.

You dont really care about me,
You dont really love who I am.
I cannot please you,
I can't forgive your sham.

Stop pretending to love me,
Its all an act.
You could atone your actions,
This I know is a fact.

I may really care about you,
I may want you to love me.
But I can't do this anymore,
This you will never see.

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Thank you.

[Kaleidoscope Eyes]

Another great poem. Well done, buddy. :)

[Atonement]

thanks sparky.

[Patchy]

Wow two great poems in 24 hours

well done mate :)

[Whisper]

Wow two great poems in 24 hours

well done mate :)

Agreed
very nice man

[Atonement]

Wow two great poems in 24 hours

well done mate :)

There are actually 6 of them.

[Hauptmann Kauffman]

Great job, I know how you feel.. Keep up the great writing, and never give up:)

[Atonement]

Thanks so much everyone. It means a lot to me that I dont suck lol.

[theOperaGhost]

Your an amazing writer. I'm jealous because I suck at writing. Your awesome.