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japanman
February 29th, 2008, 11:57 PM
It it true that I am here

a day which many would call fair

Yet I am her ..Here so cold

who could have known that me

That Guy so innocent and sweet

kind smart angelic

Would be so sore and and stressed full of emotions of hurt and regret

Alas I am here, here alone

alone to sit wondering in the cold

[7tweety] 8:17 pm: (I'm done for now)


I's hard to believe what sarted it all

What was an overachiever

At least so we thought

would be so hurt and upset over this cruel world he
would often fret

He felt hurt, hurt in so many ways

Emotions trapped behind

Deep mysterious gaze

I am soory for that poor souL

No one ever paid him the time of day

In his own niche he knew no one

None knew him

forever lost

his thought within

[7tweety] 8:29 pm: (I'm done I think)

this poem was created by a very creative thinker from vt, 7tweety very creative i just had to share it.

japanman
March 1st, 2008, 09:35 PM
another one by tweet
In a World of his Own
Beyond his eyes I see
In a world of his own
What seems to be…
Emotions thoughts trapped some way
Just trying to say…
You I see – your hands flapping
Mumbling, grunting, your head bopping
Back and forth in your seat
Rocking rhythmically to your
Own endless beat.
If only I could understand
What’s happening to Dan!
I glimpse at him, his eyes at bay
A smile from the nurse
Drives him deeper in his rhythmic way.
An out-stretched hand from the doc
Says it’s ok –
[7tweety] 6:27 pm: this place gives him the creeps!â€Â
Alas he vanishes with Dan
Beyond the door and white sheets

Away from the flickering lights,
Babies’ cries, strange faces, loud shrieks
Chairs scraping, noisy toys...children at fight.

Finally to a quiet spot he knew-
To a place where was no more
Discomfort, frustration, being blue
A place where he could say,
“I want…. I can…. I know now…
I am free…to be me!â€Â
Deneil Walker