Peter Pan poem

[KBiskit]

So a while ago, while watching Peter Pan for the first time in a long time, I wrote this poem. It's called "Oh Peter". I hope you guys like it. :)

Oh Peter;
I swore I would never grow up - fly to Neverland with you;
Now I'm 17;
I wish I kept my promise;

Oh Peter;
Children don't hate themselves as much as I;
Children don't get excited to drift off to sleep;
Children don't wonder whether tomorrow is their last;

Oh Peter;
Can you tell me when it all went wrong - when I stopped believing;
Perhaps Captain Hook was behind it;
I miss you, Peter;

[DiamondsGirl]

Aw :( childhood is always the best joy we took for granted. Sweet poem x

[Melodic]

I like this!

It puts the basic of a classic fairytale into the real world we live in.

[Poison_Ivy]

It's a good one, I like it