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Cygnus
April 15th, 2014, 12:37 AM
She is the queen of my being
I find her presence quite freeing
And only a single kiss
Can close this abyss

I see her there with her grace
Charming me with a beautiful face
She knows that her eyes
For me are a great prize

And as it happens I come to understand
This could have never been in our mind planned
And amidst this chaotic mess
She makes me eliminate all this stress

Things might be different this time
It will be quite sublime
To something new we are agreeing
And something special we are seeing.
Since she is the queen of my being.

Gamma Male
April 15th, 2014, 01:17 AM
Wow, I really liked that.



But I would've liked it even more if one of you mods could hurry up and approve that new painting I uploaded. ;) *wink wink nudge nudge*

Cygnus
April 15th, 2014, 01:30 AM
But I would've liked it even more if one of you mods could hurry up and approve that new painting I uploaded. ;) *wink wink nudge nudge*

For the next time upload it when it's not past midnight.

DiamondsGirl
April 15th, 2014, 05:32 AM
adorable :D

Synyster Shadows
April 24th, 2014, 07:14 PM
Really nice, David :)

Melodic
April 24th, 2014, 10:26 PM
I like that!

Poison_Ivy
April 28th, 2014, 10:57 AM
Good one, she must be happy if you keep writing poems for her

ImCoolBeans
April 30th, 2014, 06:38 PM
Very nice, David. You should put some music to it on piano.

flappybird
May 24th, 2014, 11:57 AM
Very nice, David. You should put some music to it on piano.

I agree. This would sound great with music.

Microcosm
May 31st, 2014, 02:21 PM
I do quite like this. Very well written.