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BJade
June 3rd, 2021, 03:39 PM
What my brain creates in the middle of the night when I'm trying to get to sleep:what: hope it's not so bad it offends the English language :lol:

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What do you do,
When your best ain't good enough?
When you give 100%
But perfect isn't good enough?

What do you do,
When all you day feel grey?
When you're asking for help,
But you just get turned away?

What do you do,
When you love someone so much?
When you want them to hug you
But you can't get in touch?

What do you do,
When you feel like crying?
When you say you're alright,
But inside feel like dieing?

What do you do,
When it's one in the morning?
When your minds wide awake,
But your body is yarning?

What do you do,
When you feel like your drowning?
When you tell them the truth,
But they just start frowning?

What do you do,
When a friend is in need?
When you don't have the answers,
But giving a hug helps indeed?

What do you do,
When you feel like you don't fit?
When we all are so different,
But inside we're all worth it?

What do you do?

Ralph.S.G.R
June 4th, 2021, 08:29 AM
Really lovely

Blueisthecolour1
June 4th, 2021, 12:01 PM
Very nice

Karalectric
June 4th, 2021, 02:21 PM
It really rings true, depths of the soul and feeling. Those are some of the best poems IMO :yes:

Jaden's_18
June 4th, 2021, 02:29 PM
Wow, loved it. Is it weird I wanna give you a hug now?

Caycedilla
June 4th, 2021, 04:29 PM
I loved this :heart: it was really good, and yeah...middle of the night thoughts can be strong since you're left alone with them

Falcons_11
June 19th, 2021, 11:22 PM
Excellent poem.

I like your use of rhyme... ABCB.