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Spooky_Eli
February 12th, 2019, 08:56 PM
So last night I kinda had a creative 70s era punk rock fever dream and i also got hit with a bit of nostagla, so i wrote this about someone who, one way or annother, isn't in my life anymore.


well your daddy's got a habbit that he just won't quit,
and you think your mom's a bitch, well i guess your right,

oh, patrick, do you remmeber me?
coz i remmeber you, oh yeah,

well the gay guys that you know are all real f*gs,
and you just can't understand it,
cos' your really quite a man, and you do what you can

oh, patrick, do you remmeber me?
coz i remmeber you, oh yeah,

Gone crusin' in your car when you found something wild,
well you think its really kinky, with the food n' all,
but you really want the douh, so you do it all,

oh, patrick, do you remmeber me?
oh, patrick, how i remmeber you,
oh yeah,

well you said you had a crush and that it was on me,
and i said i felt the same and well i kinda still do

oh, patrick, will you come home with me?
oh yeah, will you come home with me?
oh, patrick,
oh, patrick,
oh, patrick,
will you come home with me?


(upon reflection anything i used to feel romanticly for patrick is now dead, but it made up the end of the song)

And now you know what a punk rock song writen by yours trully would look like. So Yeah.

ska8er
February 12th, 2019, 10:19 PM
So last night I kinda had a creative 70s era punk rock fever dream and i also got hit with a bit of nostagla, so i wrote this about someone who, one way or annother, isn't in my life anymore.


well your daddy's got a habbit that he just won't quit,
and you think your mom's a bitch, well i guess your right,

oh, patrick, do you remmeber me?
coz i remmeber you, oh yeah,

well the gay guys that you know are all real f*gs,
and you just can't understand it,
cos' your really quite a man, and you do what you can

oh, patrick, do you remmeber me?
coz i remmeber you, oh yeah,

Gone crusin' in your car when you found something wild,
well you think its really kinky, with the food n' all,
but you really want the douh, so you do it all,

oh, patrick, do you remmeber me?
oh, patrick, how i remmeber you,
oh yeah,

well you said you had a crush and that it was on me,
and i said i felt the same and well i kinda still do

oh, patrick, will you come home with me?
oh yeah, will you come home with me?
oh, patrick,
oh, patrick,
oh, patrick,
will you come home with me?


(upon reflection anything i used to feel romanticly for patrick is now dead, but it made up the end of the song)

And now you know what a punk rock song writen by yours trully would look like. So Yeah.

Now u need a record manager and a contract. ;)

Spooky_Eli
February 12th, 2019, 10:22 PM
Now u need a record manager and a contract. ;)
:) yes Please :lol: , but really, it an't that good

ska8er
February 12th, 2019, 10:27 PM
:) yes Please :lol: , but really, it an't that good

So what punk rock lyrics u cant understand
anyway. :rolleyes:

Spooky_Eli
February 12th, 2019, 10:36 PM
So what punk rock lyrics u cant understand
anyway. :rolleyes:

well, that's true, i alway's thought blitskreg bop had a line in it that went "degenerates in heat", turns out it was something comepleatly different lol, but i'm rambling