The Mystery Girl-A Casualty Fanfiction

[Holby]

I have started writing a story about Casualty, and would very much appreciate it if you guys could read it. I need some suggestions for what happens next. I don't mind if you haven't seen the show, as I can work around that. Any suggestions are appreciated.

https://archiveofourown.org/works/14447268

[IcyCool]

I like it so far! It even got my heart beating when they found her and you described her injuries (which is weird, because I didn't expect to get so hooked to the story even though it's so short). I think that maybe they should bring her to the Hospital, and then there's a whole mystery about who she is. Maybe she tells the nurses some things that she remembers, and then they get a message from the Child Protective Services or something saying that they are going to push her into a foster home if the doctors don't find her relatives. This causes the doctors to go into a panic, and they have a limited amount of time to find the family and preserve the memories that she told them all about.

Anyways, the story is great so far despite it being so short. I look forward to reading more!

EDIT: I didn't specify who "them" was at all! I fixed it, though.

[Holby]

I like it so far! It even got my heart beating when they found her and you described her injuries (which is weird, because I didn't expect to get so hooked to the story even though it's so short). I think that maybe they should bring her to the Hospital, and then there's a whole mystery about who she is. Maybe she tells the nurses some things that she remembers, and then they get a message from the Child Protective Services or something saying that they are going to push her into a foster home if they don't find her relatives. This causes them to go into a panic, and they have a limited amount of time to find the family and preserve the memories that she told them all about.

Anyways, the story is great so far despite it being so short. I look forward to reading more!

Ooh, that seems interesting! I'll keep this in mind. Thanks!

[Holby]

https://archiveofourown.org/works/14447268/chapters/33390627

Chapter 2 is up!

[Holby]

https://archiveofourown.org/works/14447268/chapters/33484920

Chapter 3 has been posted!

[Holby]

Chapter 4 is up! Please leave comments and kudos! If you have suggestions, please leave them as well! Every one helps!

https://archiveofourown.org/works/14447268/chapters/33518670

[Holby]

https://archiveofourown.org/works/14447268/chapters/33682176

I just finished chaper 5. I need more suggestions and feedback, so please leave comments. I would really appreciate it. That way I could make the story even better and more interesting to you. Thanks!

[Holby]

Please send comments and suggestions! I may do a give away for a short story about whatever you want! Only people who leave comments will be entered.

[Holby]

https://archiveofourown.org/works/14447268/chapters/33971631

Chapter 7 is up! Keep an eye out for updates regarding the contest!

[Holby]

https://archiveofourown.org/users/HolbyFangirl/profile

Contest info is up on my bio!

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[Holby]

https://archiveofourown.org/works/14447268/chapters/34099197

Chapter 8 is up!

Remember to enter the contest! Infomis on my profile on AO3!

[Holby]

Contest has ended. Due to nobody confirming if they entered or not, only a couple people were entered, so nobody has won. I'll try another contest maybe in November.