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Danieldv77
December 21st, 2017, 02:02 AM
(This one's kinda old, from 4/28/17, but think of me posting it here as a bit of an online backup.) This thing is so edgy it can cut you just by reading it, but here goes!

We used to be friends,
but I sought to change that
as two seasons came and went
progress halted by personality
Yet, further surprised as I was
I could not keep up with the pace.

We used to date
and now I feel nothing
except loss and regret
as if I were at fault
though my blatant failures
lie not in the actions
but lack thereof.

We were to be friends
yet pushed away as I was
there was no longer a chance
as one fails another
brought down by assumption
rather than fact.

We used to be friends,
strange, isn't it?

tsman
December 26th, 2017, 04:13 PM
I love it dude!

Sweeney05
January 15th, 2018, 10:49 PM
That's really nice dude. It's great.

EmilySwimmer
January 25th, 2019, 03:01 AM
(This one's kinda old, from 4/28/17, but think of me posting it here as a bit of an online backup.) This thing is so edgy it can cut you just by reading it, but here goes!

We used to be friends,
but I sought to change that
as two seasons came and went
progress halted by personality
Yet, further surprised as I was
I could not keep up with the pace.

We used to date
and now I feel nothing
except loss and regret
as if I were at fault
though my blatant failures
lie not in the actions
but lack thereof.

We were to be friends
yet pushed away as I was
there was no longer a chance
as one fails another
brought down by assumption
rather than fact.

We used to be friends,
strange, isn't it?

Sounds sad