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Breakeven
March 3rd, 2014, 02:52 PM
when your all covered in blood and you want to give up , love yourself
love yourself when everything hurt and you feel the lowest you ever felt
you love yourself when all these voices in your head tells you the crawliest things
love yourself when you just want to shut it off
love yourself no matter what people calls you
love yourself even if you think you are bad or the worst
love yourself when your holding a razor against ur skin
love yourself when they cant love you
love yourself when the world turns his back on you
love yourself if you feel like dieing
love yourself everytime nothing feels right
love yourself when no one understand the things you feel
love yourself when its dark and its after 2 am

AlexOnToast
March 3rd, 2014, 02:58 PM
Very positive :) I really enjoyed reading this, well done :)

Synyster Shadows
March 3rd, 2014, 06:17 PM
Other than a few spelling mistakes, this is very well done! Good job! :)

DisneyPrincess27
March 11th, 2014, 06:17 PM
Great loved reading it

MechaSniper
March 11th, 2014, 06:24 PM
when your all covered in blood and you want to give up , love yourself
love yourself when everything hurt and you feel the lowest you ever felt
you love yourself when all these voices in your head tells you the crawliest things
love yourself when you just want to shut it off
love yourself no matter what people calls you
love yourself even if you think you are bad or the worst
love yourself when your holding a razor against ur skin
love yourself when they cant love you
love yourself when the world turns his back on you
love yourself if you feel like dieing
love yourself everytime nothing feels right
love yourself when no one understand the things you feel
love yourself when its dark and its after 2 am

Well said. vrey well said

Charlie48
March 11th, 2014, 06:49 PM
I love myself :D

Typho
March 12th, 2014, 04:15 PM
Nice, good job!

JamesSuperBoy
March 12th, 2014, 04:19 PM
Love yourself and love everyone around.

Breakeven
March 27th, 2014, 02:44 PM
thanks guys :D

Poison_Ivy
April 28th, 2014, 12:56 AM
It's a good poem, I like it

radsniper
April 28th, 2014, 01:11 AM
thank you it was what i needed

Microcosm
May 31st, 2014, 02:07 PM
Really good poem