Im trying to write something

[JesusChrist]

Hello :). Man i haven't logged into this account in forever. Anyways, I was commenting on a phenomenon and all of a sudden I tried to mix in my learnings from language arts and I tried to create a story.

So far I have made a page 1 but i'm not sure if I should continue. Anyone want to read 1 page and give me your comments?

link below

www. wattpad.com/349971000-paranoid-chapter-1-face-to-face

i put a space in between the www. and wattpad because I am not allowed to post links with less than 5 posts

[Kory123]

Hah, i understand and get distracted like that too. Dang what you have right now could be a best seller. It is literally amazing!

[Cadanance00]

My mom writes and says to think and write it down. You can come back later and make sense of it but the important thing is to get it down so it doesn't get a way and above all don't try to make it sound perfect or you squeeze the life out of it.