Underground_Network
February 22nd, 2008, 07:27 PM
I found a song I wrote two years ago, I couldn't remember exactly how it sounded, so I completely changed it (it was also two pages long without anything being separated, and it was just way too long).. So this is a version of the song I just made... (The chorus to the old version is now in my sig)
"Cold Outside"
Its cold outside,
On my own,
I’ve lost my pride…
All alone,
I think I’m dying.
Can’t be sure,
Its way too early…
Oh I know,
The truth will be told,
But I’m growing too old…
Will anyone know, the whole fucking truth?
Oh I do not know…
Oh I can’t be sure…
Its cold outside,
On my own,
I’ve lost my pride…
Can’t be found,
I’m lost in darkness.
And now I know…
I’m out on my own,
Oh I’m so alone…
I think I’m dying…
Can’t be sure,
Its way too early…
Or am I dead?
Oh I do not know...
Oh I can’t be sure...
All alone,
I feel like dying…
On my own,
I can’t stop crying…
The wound, it hurts,
It won’t stop burning…
The homes ablaze,
So many lives lost,
So many lives cost,
But no one is saved,
There’s no hero here...
Its cold outside,
On my own,
I’ve lost my pride…
All alone,
I think I’m dying.
Can’t be sure,
Its way too early…
Oh I know...
Now I know for sure...
There’s no glory here…
No one will survive,
Everybody will die…
Its cold outside…
Oh I know…
Its cold outside…
Oh it hurts…
Its cold outside...
"Cold Outside"
Its cold outside,
On my own,
I’ve lost my pride…
All alone,
I think I’m dying.
Can’t be sure,
Its way too early…
Oh I know,
The truth will be told,
But I’m growing too old…
Will anyone know, the whole fucking truth?
Oh I do not know…
Oh I can’t be sure…
Its cold outside,
On my own,
I’ve lost my pride…
Can’t be found,
I’m lost in darkness.
And now I know…
I’m out on my own,
Oh I’m so alone…
I think I’m dying…
Can’t be sure,
Its way too early…
Or am I dead?
Oh I do not know...
Oh I can’t be sure...
All alone,
I feel like dying…
On my own,
I can’t stop crying…
The wound, it hurts,
It won’t stop burning…
The homes ablaze,
So many lives lost,
So many lives cost,
But no one is saved,
There’s no hero here...
Its cold outside,
On my own,
I’ve lost my pride…
All alone,
I think I’m dying.
Can’t be sure,
Its way too early…
Oh I know...
Now I know for sure...
There’s no glory here…
No one will survive,
Everybody will die…
Its cold outside…
Oh I know…
Its cold outside…
Oh it hurts…
Its cold outside...