lonely.....

[amelhope]

I don’t know how or why but i’m not happy. My heart filled with sadness and darkness I feel so lonely Sadness makes me fall down I don’t have any hope inside of me my happiness runs away and i’m here alone i can’t cry and i can’t express my feeling to anyone my name means hope but i don’t have hope i always give happyness to people but i can’t give happyness to myself i want just to ran away to no-where Because I am fed up with all this.
In the end i want to say that i have a great feeling inside me that one day i can find happyness within myself because my heart always say to me « never lose hope ! »
bye.
how do you find my writing is it good or bad...:confused::whoops:

hey where are you people..

[Croconaw]

You could improve your grammar. Other than that, it's okay.

[Its Pretty]

Is this supposed to be like poetry or something? To be honest, it's pretty bland for poetry.

Are you trying to get feedback on your English? Lack of periods means lack of attention and lack of readers.

[amelhope]

well thank you for your words it helps me lot

what about this it's abou life you know it's a Personal experience

listen to my heart he's gonna say something about life

life makes us feel like we don't have any value in it it makes us suffer from a lot of problems wich throw us into a storm full of sadness hopeless and all the bad feelings and we feel like we are covered with failur weakness and despair so we can't cry we can't speak or express how we feel to any one, but it comes moments where you find a little hope deep in your heart wich give you the strenth to move on , so you fight and struggle looking for a solution until you find it but when you feel that everything is ok you find that you lost a lot of things and sometimes one of those things that you've lost is a person who was the closest to your heart and that what will really crush you ........
and ..you try to do any thing to go back but..NO!! the past is something that you can't change , but at least try to make things better using lessons from the past even if it was hard on you to think about the past
you know past is something that you can't deny because it's live within you inside your heart run with your blood

bye have fun