Help With Grammar, please!

[Sun55]

Hi!
My grammar is horrible and I am doing my best to improve upon it. I have to write an essay and my opening sentence seems awkwardly worded. :confused:

[meryberry]

Are you looking for a feedback or you want to find a writing help?
It looks like the paper is not ready at all.

[Tim95]

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[unknownuser]

Are you going to post it here, so we can offer our advice on how to improve it?

[Croconaw]

Can you post your essay here? I'd love to help, although I need to see what the problem is.