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Castle of Glass
January 21st, 2014, 09:00 PM
wrote another poem. yay me.

The Ultimate Choice

A bright sign,
A doorway with light,
A way out of a dark room.
A choice.

To fight or to give up.
To stand or to run.
To suffer or to be calm.
A choice.

One path leads to the world,
a world full of possibilities,
which is guarded by a beast.
A choice.

The other path is peace,
a quiet and clam world with nothing,
only requiring a sacrifice.
A choice.

The closer on gets,
The harder it is to commit.
The ultimate decision of,
A choice.

One path is regretful.
The other is selfish.
Both are hated.
A choice.

To live or to die.
The ultimate choice.

DorkimusPrime
January 22nd, 2014, 01:21 AM
Yes, yay you, because it's a great poem. I think it's fantastic.

ArtemisLianCrock
January 30th, 2014, 09:31 AM
Love it!!!! This is so cool!!!

JamesSuperBoy
January 30th, 2014, 10:12 AM
The closer on gets,

did you mean the closer one gets

AlexOnToast
January 30th, 2014, 10:34 AM
Very deep, I like it..made me think which is something I like :) Yay you :)