King_of_Hearts
January 15th, 2014, 11:27 PM
I wrote this poem about the girl I am in love with... I don't know, I thought it was okay. I will gladly take suggestions and/or feedback :)
Anyways, here it is:
Her
She is the one who pulls the sun up in the morning, and the one who makes the moon shine at night. She is the island of truth in a sea of lies. She is a torch of hope in a tunnel of dismay. When she is happy, the world is bright and I am on top of the world. When she is sad, the world goes gray and I wish I could take her pain and just throw it out the window. She is everything and more to me. Seeing her pours an ocean of happiness into me and time seems to stand still. She can make the world stand still and my heart skip a beat, just by gracing me with her presence. She makes me feel things I never knew I could feel. If we fight or get mad at each other, the world falls apart around me. When we make up, the world is of cotton candy. When she sleeps, I hope her dreams are as sweet as sugar. When she wakes, I hope the world bows before her majesty. She is every thought in my empty head. She is my Emily, and she makes my life worth staying for.
Anyways, here it is:
Her
She is the one who pulls the sun up in the morning, and the one who makes the moon shine at night. She is the island of truth in a sea of lies. She is a torch of hope in a tunnel of dismay. When she is happy, the world is bright and I am on top of the world. When she is sad, the world goes gray and I wish I could take her pain and just throw it out the window. She is everything and more to me. Seeing her pours an ocean of happiness into me and time seems to stand still. She can make the world stand still and my heart skip a beat, just by gracing me with her presence. She makes me feel things I never knew I could feel. If we fight or get mad at each other, the world falls apart around me. When we make up, the world is of cotton candy. When she sleeps, I hope her dreams are as sweet as sugar. When she wakes, I hope the world bows before her majesty. She is every thought in my empty head. She is my Emily, and she makes my life worth staying for.