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Captain Canada
December 25th, 2013, 09:50 AM
Is it true?
Did you really leave forever?
I just want to say sorry
I cant get you back
And it breaks my heart
Until theres little pieces of scrap

You didnt have to go
We could've mended your wounds together
Or was there no solution
To making your problems better?

I wish I could've just said
Three words before you left
But I understand
That theres no turning back

Whats done is done
And now that your gone
Either dead in a coffin
Or a new girl you have won
I just wish I could've said
Three words before you left
But now these words have changed to six
And your heart I wish I kept

You left me wondering
Just where to go in life
Because of this
I HATE YOU

You left me wondering
If you were even alive
Your personality was striking
And so were your eyes
You were my first love
You were the first to go
And when you left me alone
I wish that I could know...
I LOVE YOU

Some words were taken from a Three Days Grace song in the last stanza... Tell me what you guys think!

Dark Unicorn
January 12th, 2014, 04:16 PM
The fk doed it matter? I think your poem is brilliant.It's soaked with emotion.I could almost feel your pain reading that.Well done!

AlexOnToast
January 12th, 2014, 04:27 PM
Very good piece of poetry....I could really feel like I was seeing what you see. Wish I could write poetry, maybe i'l give it a try...