A poem about Winter

[DorkimusPrime]

School is out,
And weather is chilling,
Sleds are thrilling,
As they bolt down hills,
Family is coming,
And carols are everlastingly humming,
In everyone's hearts,
Winter is here,
And folks are overflowing with cheer.

Love to know what you think, and what can be fixed.

[skittles_was_here]

i like it.

[Dark Unicorn]

It's really good but it doesn't seem...seamless, it's not really flowing towards the end otherwise I absolutely love it.Very well thought out.Simple and to the point.Well written!

[Fallen_Eagle]

That's a lovely poem you wrote there. Makes me want to write a little winter poem of my own c:

[HotGurlMixy]

It's A Pretty Good Poem :]

[gliderman]

I like it :P

[SweetFab]

I like it. For some reason all winter poems and songs make me remember of Queen's "A Winter's Tale".

[Synyster Shadows]

Nice job! I like it! :)

[Matt_97]

Like it, good rhyme scheme even if it is broken with the word "heart" :)