DorkimusPrime
December 11th, 2013, 12:46 AM
My imaginary creature is amazing,
It's as fast as a cheetah,
My creature is immense,
It's tall like a skyscraper,
And wide as a whale,
My imaginary creature has beautiful wings,
It flies as high as a rocket for the moon,
It lives deep in caves,
And feasts like a king on any creatures passing by,
My creature is all of those things and more,
But it does not exist.
I would love to hear some feedback, what I should change, fix, and generally what you think of it. Also you may have noticed my poems must always have a darker or sadder turn at the end.
It's as fast as a cheetah,
My creature is immense,
It's tall like a skyscraper,
And wide as a whale,
My imaginary creature has beautiful wings,
It flies as high as a rocket for the moon,
It lives deep in caves,
And feasts like a king on any creatures passing by,
My creature is all of those things and more,
But it does not exist.
I would love to hear some feedback, what I should change, fix, and generally what you think of it. Also you may have noticed my poems must always have a darker or sadder turn at the end.