Cassius
December 5th, 2013, 11:49 PM
It would be appreciated if you guys would critique my writing. Not all are poems but all poetic
The sweetest embrace,
True joy stems from you my love,
A cheek so lovely
Wherefore doth thou smite thine brothers? Wherefore doth thou turn thy cheek against our love? Thy compassion for thine brother lies not anon ; wherefore doth thou pray it not be found? You be scar'd of love. Wherefore? The thief who stole thy heart stole thyself along. Wherefore? Wherefore?
There will be more eventually, but this is good for now for I'm sleepu
The sweetest embrace,
True joy stems from you my love,
A cheek so lovely
Wherefore doth thou smite thine brothers? Wherefore doth thou turn thy cheek against our love? Thy compassion for thine brother lies not anon ; wherefore doth thou pray it not be found? You be scar'd of love. Wherefore? The thief who stole thy heart stole thyself along. Wherefore? Wherefore?
There will be more eventually, but this is good for now for I'm sleepu