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kire
November 18th, 2013, 10:02 PM
This is a poem I wrote about a group of friends that i had to stop hanging out with, and how a sometimes wish i could still be friends with them. There is a certain song that always reminds me of the times i spent with those friends, that's what this poem is about. Please give me your honest opinion, I've never showed this poem to anyone before.


When I hear that familiar tune,
It reminds me of last June,
A time that passed so soon,
That has put me in the tomb.

Now I lie awake in bed,
Wishing I was there instead,
Strong thoughts go through my head,
Without them I feel dead.

But deep inside I know it’s good,
Things are finally the way they should,
But sometimes I just wish I could,
Stand where I once have stood.

PinkFloyd
November 18th, 2013, 10:33 PM
Dude. That poem is really great. The rhyme scheme is top notch!

Whenever I hear the song "Shine On You Crazy Diamond" by Pink Floyd, it reminds me of the first time I smoked pot with my best friend.

Dark Unicorn
November 30th, 2013, 06:12 PM
That's really,super good.Honest opinion.Amazing poem.I loved it.