What do ya' think of my poem?

[DorkimusPrime]

-Human Curiosity-

This door goes no where,
I know it's true,
But somehow I'm tempted to go through.

[kire]

I like it! I think many people can relate to it

[Jess]

I like it - nice and short.

[NeuroTiger]

Nice and concise!!!

[hockeyfan]

It sounds better if u get rid of the it in the last line

[Living For Love]

It sounds better if u get rid of the it in the last line

Yup, I agree.

[DorkimusPrime]

It sounds better if u get rid of the it in the last line

Thanks, I will, and that does seem to help.

[Abyssal Echo]

Nice and short....I like it

[Dark Unicorn]

Ooh I love it

[sqishy]

Short

not many short poems around here, should be more of them

[Saint of Sinners]

I think that sums up the subject matter nicely. Good Job!

[Cassius]

Keep the last line, edit line two, add fourth line

[Luminous]

Short but sweet. You captured a lot in just a few words.

[DorkimusPrime]

Keep the last line, edit line two, add fourth line
Thanks for the feedback, but I really don't know how to add a fourth line, it's all summed up in 3.

[Achillea]

Really good poem!:)