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DrRaiku
October 16th, 2013, 09:16 PM
When I was in a very dark place in my life (a little over a year ago).. I wrote a collection of fairly dark and depressing poems..
Here is an example:


The casket lowers,
A choir of angels missing,
No light at the end.
No tunnels at all,
Emptiness,
I take a deep breath,
But can't stop the wind blowing,
Tears slip from heaven.
I remember you calling,
Through the pouring rain.
I remember waking up,
Hollow,
Empty,
Lonely.
I can't take this,
Constant feeling of dread,
I'll be with you soon.

Luminous
October 16th, 2013, 09:59 PM
Very sad, very beautiful.

Castle of Glass
October 16th, 2013, 11:44 PM
So sad, and meaningful

sqishy
October 17th, 2013, 11:55 AM
Deep and sad :(.