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WalkingWounded
October 9th, 2013, 08:34 AM
I am the walking wounded
My battle scars are hidden
by the shackles around my arms.

The sunshine blinds me
And the sea of faces,
So bright.

I’m going home now
To my bunker
In the dark.
To reveal my battle scars.

I shall lock the door
And choose my weapon.
For if my enemy does return,
I shall walk no more.


-LD

Baby-Kitten
October 9th, 2013, 02:28 PM
Oh wow that was Awsomeness!!

Amazerful
October 11th, 2013, 01:39 PM
That was beautiful, thanks for sharing

survivor
October 11th, 2013, 08:49 PM
I really like it. Good poem.

Harley Quinn
October 11th, 2013, 10:47 PM
Cutting and Self Harm :arrow: The Open Book

roadwarrior
October 14th, 2013, 02:10 PM
that's nice to read :)

SawyerSauce
October 14th, 2013, 02:43 PM
I really like it :)
I like how you separated the lines so that it is more dramatic.
Your words are powerful.

sqishy
October 14th, 2013, 04:07 PM
Very nice
with power