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Mob Boss
September 28th, 2013, 03:44 PM
Crimson, sinewy rivers enhance the
moss undertones in my eyes.
And my voice shakes when vulnerability seeps out of the fissures in my spine.
When asked where I am, "lost" is the only word my shy lips can find,
then I self-consciously pull at the hems of my uncharacteristic skirt,
because I'm not so refined.

The perfectionment of imperfection
has become an art form of mine.


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I'm just trying to get myself out of this gosh darn writer's block.

Miserabilia
September 28th, 2013, 03:57 PM
beautiful

Mynick
September 28th, 2013, 04:01 PM
Its truly amazing

Mob Boss
September 28th, 2013, 04:23 PM
Thank you so much, both of you. :3

Mynick
September 28th, 2013, 04:24 PM
Plus i really like how you duel with this idea so to speak.

Mob Boss
September 28th, 2013, 06:02 PM
Thank you so much, Mynick. There was a bit of a duel, so to speak. I purposely did it so. The poem is about being perfectly flawed, so the opposition of the two definitely creates a duel quality. :) thank you for reading.

survivor
September 28th, 2013, 07:48 PM
That poem is truly beautiful and I love the meaning.

Jess
September 28th, 2013, 07:49 PM
Yet another amazing poem :)

Mob Boss
September 28th, 2013, 08:22 PM
Thank you so much....both Jess'. :p I'm glad you both enjoyed.

sqishy
September 28th, 2013, 09:08 PM
Wow!

Mob Boss
September 28th, 2013, 09:38 PM
Wow back at you. :D Thank you. I'm going to assume that was an expression of enjoyment? If not, I'm sorry. :P

Emerald Dream
September 28th, 2013, 09:44 PM
I love your poems, Bridge :)

Abyssal Echo
September 28th, 2013, 09:59 PM
Love it Bridg :)

Mob Boss
September 29th, 2013, 10:57 AM
Thank you both so much. :3 I'm glad you both enjoyed.