Currently working on a fictional story.

[KimuraWannabe116]

So, I started making a fictional story a few days ago, and I am really getting into it. The name of the story is "Unidentifiable Darkness" and it is a very sick, and twisted one. I have been the one who has so far made up all the details, and periods of times, and I have to say, I feel like I am accomplishing something.


I will give you a summary of what it is about. This guys name is Koral Kane, (later on in the story his nickname will be Triple k, aka, Killer Koral Kane) and he had grown up for the first 8 years with physically and emtionally abusive parents. The teachers had become concerned, and after an a investigation, he had been placed in a mental institution and his father had gone to jail. After a few year of his rapid improvement in his mentality, he had been placed in a foster home. But overtime, he had developed dark, and disturbing thoughts, and he had even bullied a particular child their, to the point where the kid had almost commited suicide. More and more sick and disturbing thoughts had come to his mind to the point where he was ploting things he would do when he was older.

This is as far as I can tell you guys so that you can have some idea of what this story is about. I will keep you to updated about this.

[sqishy]

Looking forward to those updates :).

[Syvelocin]

Has potential. I hope it's not just darkness. There's a lot of possibility to shed light on individuals with twisted minds and that it isn't all just crazy, and often these thoughts are even troubling for them but they can't help it. Especially with the abusive parents. There's inner turmoil there, because there is some tendency for victims of abuse to become abusers themselves but obviously they also have the emotional and literal scars from the same sort of acts they are committing. I'm curious where you would go with the conclusion with a story like this, or what exactly the plot revolves around (I know the kid, but what the central conflict is).