Poem: Lack of Inspiration

[Rene]

Ive been trying to write a poem all day long
But when I would start it, somethig usually went wrong
If the rhymes weren't lame, the similes were cheesy
Writing this poem was not going to be easy

I sat at my desk, all day and night
Trying to find a topic that's right
But as I saw the paper lay there, empty
This feeling of desperation overcame me

My chances of finishing this poem were slim
I felt the light of hope in me go dim
My lack of inspiration was driving me insane
I was begging for some as I pounded my brain

But then I looked at my paper with glee
As I saw this Poem staring at me
Seems when it is inspiration we desire
Even without it, it can still inspire

Wrote this in my English class a year ago. What do you think?:)

[The Trendy Wolf]

This is fantastic and creative. I really love the rhymes

[Rene]

This is fantastic and creative. I really love the rhymes

Thanks!

[The Trendy Wolf]

Thanks!

I'm not much of a poem writer, I like to write little stories that have deep meanings. If you like you can see my most recent thread with my short story in it. I think you'll like it.

[Rene]

I'm not much of a poem writer, I like to write little stories that have deep meanings. If you like you can see my most recent thread with my short story in it. I think you'll like it.

Same here. My writing is based on my current mood at the moment which in this case was a lack of creativity lol. And I'll be sure to check it out!

[The Trendy Wolf]

Same here. My writing is based on my current mood at the moment which in this case was a lack of creativity lol. And I'll be sure to check it out!

Thanks :)