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[Castle of Glass]

Like water drips from a faucet,
Like rain drops from the sky,
The red liquid drops from the metal.
No matter how hard,
No matter how fast,
There simply is never enough.
One, Two, Three, Four,
The strikes go on and on.
If i stop, i fall,
If i go, i die.
When will it stop? If at all.



Just a poem i wrote.

[Mynick]

That's amazing Niilo. All the emotion, the feelings, and it's all true.

[Saint of Sinners]

Awesome!
I like the way you use short words that convey the sense of confusion and never-ending.
Keep it up!

[SawyerSauce]

It's like song lyrics, the words flow so nicely.
Meter and pathos are precise. I really love it :)