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Lawrence P
September 22nd, 2013, 12:01 AM
'The Same'

Stop
Pain
no gain
lost war
Hearts bore
Loves name
Pain
Stop
No gain
The SAME

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dsi411
September 22nd, 2013, 09:12 PM
Prettay good. What are you using it for?
Lawrence P
September 22nd, 2013, 10:51 PM
Prettay good. What are you using it for?

It's just something I did. Helped me express how I feel to myself.
sqishy
September 24th, 2013, 05:32 PM
It's just something I did. Helped me express how I feel to myself.

It's good. Poems don't need a quantity of words when they form great quality to express. That's why I prefer short poems over long ones. This one is one I will remember.