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musicjunkie1310
September 13th, 2013, 05:07 AM
Hey :)
This is a poem I wrote yesterday... on all us cutters

A scar on my wrist
A pierce through my heart
Breaking apart, bursting out
Unable to fix the shards
A whisper in my head
Taunting voice, deafening shout
Twisted, tangled complexity
No innocence, no purity
Red drops turn to a red river
Watching the flow, the viscosity
With thrill and pleasure, I shiver
No one sees, no one hears
No one cares, they all steer
Clear of me, it's crystal clear
I'm a shadow, blending in
Unseen, unheard, uncared for
As I drown and try to reach the shore
But accept at the same time
That this is my prime
Though not worth a dime
I drown in this crimson pool
Cause I'm a victim
The devil's fool.



Hope you liked it :)

NeuroTiger
September 13th, 2013, 05:33 AM
Nice poem :)
I'm eager for another poem from you :)

1_21Guns
September 13th, 2013, 05:37 AM
that's a lovely poem :)

Mynick
September 13th, 2013, 06:17 AM
It's great. Keep writing them.

Castle of Glass
September 13th, 2013, 09:45 AM
that was beautiful. and meaningful. it was just amazing.

Luminous
September 13th, 2013, 09:54 AM
That's beautiful. You should write some more!

musicjunkie1310
September 13th, 2013, 11:04 AM
Thank you all :) It's something spontaneous I came up with :P