Log in

View Full Version : I am a shadow


Mannequin
January 23rd, 2008, 10:21 PM
Molding into what is my conformer.
Blending into vacant walls
and smushed between two moving lips
before a kiss.
I can not be detached,
I'm only lonely and searching for time,
space, anything...(everything).
I'm nothing more than an empty void
of pain and suffering.
Shoved behind closed doors
of abuse--
only able to watch in silence
and immense suffrage

I am a shadow.
I am many,
I am one,
conformity at its best--
constructing breaks
and tearing the torn,
becoming a perfect life form.

I am a shadow.

-Me

sophies_justice
January 30th, 2008, 02:51 PM
okay so i know you posted this awhile ago, so sorry, but wow was this good. it "spoke" to me. i really like it. thanks for posting it!

...

Mannequin
January 31st, 2008, 09:26 PM
thanks, this honestly may be one of my best.
i dont think it looks very good or sounds great.
but i poured so much emotion into writing this and meant all of it so much.
im glad it spoke to someone!