Amber Tides

[Mob Boss]

A man I once knew
Lent away his unmemorable name and copper eyes.
Cradled by the adamantine arms of addiction and the wrinkled hands of time;
One amber drop multiplied until
Heavily he sank beneath the burning tides.

Once I knew a drowned man who
Lent me his copper eyes, and there has not been a day, from them, I did not cry.


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I wanted to try something personal and different.
So tried an acrostic piece.

[Jess]

Lovely. I really like those kind of poems, interesting to see how the authors use each letter

[sqishy]

Very nice, like the lettering

[Saint of Sinners]

I think it's pretty impactful. Keep up the good work!

[Texas warrior]

Deep, nice flow, this is really good.

[Abyssal Echo]

Another good poem from a great person.
Thanks for sharing Bridg :) I hope one day you'll be able to get your poems published