Advice on continuality!!!

[Bilbo Baggins]

So, I am writing a story. Excpet, I stink at continuing things. In one part, math class goes to lunch! I need advice. Might as well tell the plot... Plot: The Chosen Four: Jack, Marie, Ann, and Carter were living a normal teenage life, complete with sports, homework, and relationships. But, one day, when Marie's dad is said to be held hostage, the group must resort on an anchient and dangerous way to save him, finding the sports of the founders of the magical school, Hogwarts. As they risk their lives on a perilous journey, all will be faced with a deadly choice that will impact the world of magic forever.

I'm dons with that one. The next is the new one.

The four heirs of Hogwarts are living fine and nice, in their own loving relationships, and their other two friends, Dan and Ashley. But when a mysterious army invades the school, Dan and Ashley are revelaed to be founders of Hogwarts too, and they must band together to find six gems in a week or else the school is destroyed. They will face a terrifying guardian at each gem, unlocking their deepest fears and dreams, but the gems will give them new and almost unstoppable powers, maybe enough to defeat the army...

Thank...

[Syvelocin]

A. I can't even tell what you're asking. You want people to give you ideas for your own fanfiction? Or are you suffering from my common ailment that is "too attention-challenged to finish story." Cause that's why I clicked the thread, lol.
B. The reason I personally don't answer threads here often is because I don't know the experience levels of the members here and I tend to treat people the way I would treat a peer in my writing classes coming to me for help. I don't like people thinking I'm a jerk for simply helping them be a better writer.
B2. People here aren't usually clear whether they want praise or serious criticism. I usually don't answer threads of this nature unless this is stated, just to avoid unnecessary conflict.

[Magus]

Avoid fanfiction if you want to improve.

Build your own universe. You are the creator. You have the license.