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suicidalbutter
August 18th, 2013, 03:20 PM
No matter how much I try,
he'll never see me.

No matter how much I try,
he won't know I'm there.

No matter how much I try,
he won't know I'm watching.

No matter how much I try,
I'll always seem invisible.

Castle of Glass
August 18th, 2013, 10:38 PM
something to do with a guy i take it?

and yet again, amazingly written, you on the last line, i would at a comma after "seem" so there is a small pause.