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Mob Boss
August 14th, 2013, 07:40 PM
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if i disappear tonight,
leaving a bare shadow in my wake,
i'll repent to the faceless
and face those that spit my name.

i will cut out the tongues
of the few who've loved,
so my shadow can rest in darkness
without the sunlight's reviving touch.

momentarily i'll forget
the feel of the searing words and pain
that revel in the depths of my mind
and hides behind my name.

and if a fiery hell exists,
may it keep my body warm,
'cause this cold skin's only purpose
is to give my deceitful bones a lifelike form.














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.Note: I left the words all purposely lowercase.

Matt_97
August 14th, 2013, 07:52 PM
You did it again, you blew me away by your amazing use of words :) its an amazing talent you have, never let it go to waste and never give up on writing such beautiful poetry :D

conniption
August 15th, 2013, 12:30 AM
How...what... Brilliant!!

Mob Boss
August 15th, 2013, 10:28 PM
You did it again, you blew me away by your amazing use of words :) its an amazing talent you have, never let it go to waste and never give up on writing such beautiful poetry :D
thank you so much for such encouraging words!! :D
How...what... Brilliant!!

danke!

CharlieHorse
August 15th, 2013, 10:31 PM
Please don't disappear :(


I'll miss you too much :(

Jess
August 16th, 2013, 10:25 PM
And another brilliant poem! Great job :D

Incompris
August 16th, 2013, 10:38 PM
That was amazing!

Abyssal Echo
August 16th, 2013, 10:47 PM
That was amazing!

I have to agree with Silent Wolf :) That was amazing.

Another great poem by an awesome person :D