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Mob Boss
August 13th, 2013, 01:00 PM
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Only you have the eyes I will drain oceans from,
so not to leak salty tears.
I'd gradually die a thousand times to stave-off your macabre fears --
to watch your restless eyes for once be still.


I will excise the darkest depths of my mind
where you are engraved,
to forget the sound of your bittersweet name,
if the way my thorned-roses growing tightly upon your heart is causing too much pain.
And when you forget the art of manually breathing,
I will draw my last breath into your lips just as my heart stops beating.

If only you felt the same.







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Abyssal Echo
August 13th, 2013, 01:41 PM
thats awesome Bridg :) brought tears to my eyes cause I wish I could find someone that felt the same way.

Matt_97
August 14th, 2013, 09:02 AM
Wow that poem is amazing!!! A real piece of art work :D do keep writing them because your just so amazing at writing them, with all your imagery and emotive language and stuff :)

Jess
August 14th, 2013, 10:57 AM
Beautiful poem, once again

deadpie
August 14th, 2013, 02:27 PM
Your poetry is like candy... So addicting and feels realistic with its emotions rather than angst exploited horribly. This poem is quite cold.

Charara
August 14th, 2013, 07:12 PM
Good work, you have beautiful poem talent :)

Mob Boss
August 14th, 2013, 07:37 PM
thats awesome Bridg :) brought tears to my eyes cause I wish I could find someone that felt the same way.
Aww, thank you, Mattie. :hug: You will. I'm sure of it. You have to weed out the bad to get to the rose. #thisshizzjustgotdeep
Wow that poem is amazing!!! A real piece of art work :D do keep writing them because your just so amazing at writing them, with all your imagery and emotive language and stuff :)
Thank ya, dude. I will definitely keep posting them. :) Glad you enjoyed.
Beautiful poem, once again
Thank you, Jess. :D
Your poetry is like candy... So addicting and feels realistic with its emotions rather than angst exploited horribly. This poem is quite cold.
Thanks, dude. :D I refuse to write like a teenage angst. If I start to, somebody please cut off my hands.
Good work, you have beautiful poem talent :)

Thank ya, Ma'am!