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lightPainting
August 9th, 2013, 08:17 PM
any helpful Critiques are welcome.
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unknownuser
August 9th, 2013, 10:39 PM
Everything looks really nice; sharp and vibrant! :)

Some small technical suggestions/criticism:
1. maybe a tighter crop (using the same proportions) to eliminate a little bit of the empty space up top, or a square crop on the flower might look nice
2. this one's my favorite of the group; nice composition, great colors
3. top of the flower looks a little white/blown out; maybe try burning that area a teeny bit?
4. I really like this one, too. Maybe it's just my monitor, but the pink flowers looks to have a slightly blue/cool tint to it? Maybe try playing with the colors and warming it up? Square crop might look interesting, too.
5, 6. I think these two look really nice as they are.

Nice job, thanks for sharing!

Joe245
August 30th, 2013, 02:38 PM
I like the first one