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lightPainting
July 9th, 2013, 02:45 AM
Hopefully i'm growing as a photographer. Cant wait to read your response!http://farm6.staticflickr.com/5508/9226672502_3cc48b9c49_b.jpghttp://farm4.staticflickr.com/3697/9223880717_3ec0b16a94_b.jpg (http://www.flickr.com/photos/
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Tiggert12
July 9th, 2013, 02:52 AM
Nice Love the ring very simple (not cluttered) Keep it up
Abyssal Echo
July 9th, 2013, 04:24 AM
I think they are all good but, my favorite is the ring.
colepuck
July 9th, 2013, 07:00 AM
The Ring is absolutely brilliant Im need to try that next time it's sunny :D
Danny Phantom
July 11th, 2013, 01:52 PM
Very nice! :D
chezhans
July 14th, 2013, 09:06 PM
I like all three shots actually...very very nice :) It's a good effort
LouBerry
July 14th, 2013, 09:24 PM
I really really like these. Keep it up. Do some more close up shots like the ring in the book.
kayleethegray
July 14th, 2013, 09:28 PM
The only thing I really have to say is the rule of thirds on the ring one. If the ring was off to wither the left or the right, I think it would be absolutely flawless. Other than that tiny critique, these are phenomenal! Keep it up :3
lightPainting
July 15th, 2013, 01:21 AM
thanks guys for the responses.. Im glad you like them :) do you want to see more black&white or some color ones?
hihowisitgoin
July 22nd, 2013, 08:59 PM
Ya the ring book one looks pretty cool
Polo2847
August 1st, 2013, 02:59 AM
I love the ring!!!
The tennis picture is a panorama I assume? I can tell from the lines that it has some camera lens distortion in it. See if you can try to fix that. I use Adobe Lightroom to edit my photos and there's a lens correction option. It has a lens profile, where you pick your camera brand and the type of lens and it automatically corrects distortion according to that lens specifications.
lightPainting
August 1st, 2013, 05:05 PM
I love the ring!!!
The tennis picture is a panorama I assume? I can tell from the lines that it has some camera lens distortion in it. See if you can try to fix that. I use Adobe Lightroom to edit my photos and there's a lens correction option. It has a lens profile, where you pick your camera brand and the type of lens and it automatically corrects distortion according to that lens specifications.
thank you for telling, I couldn't tell that. I'm actually getting lightroom5 pretty soon.
Jess
August 1st, 2013, 10:24 PM
I love the ring in the book one :D
Party256
August 4th, 2013, 05:55 PM
I like the reading one.
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