Some feedback please?:)

[audiophile5]

Hey there.. I was wondering if there is anyone willing to read an about 12 pages beginning document I've been writing.. It's the beginning of what I hope to to be a novel, and I would need some objective feedback.. If anyone wants to, please tell me so I can send it to you.(I hope this post is not against the rules). Thank you

[TheSpiceMustFlow]

Hmm... You know what? Sure, i will read it!

[Miserabilia]

ill read it, sure.

[Conqueror of Hearts]

Me too :)

[WaffleSingSong]

Me Four!

[Cinderella96]

I would love to read it :)

[jayjay's toocool]

Yeah sure if its not boring lol. but sure sir